JAFT's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fight Ring (clay)]

You are one of the few

claymationists that can make an actually decent claymation. You exceeded my expectations and delivered a well done flash compared to all the clay ones I have seen. Let's see...
You made faces... something very simple, but so rarely seen.
You had blood and guts, thumbs up.
You had sound effects.
Funny announcers... check.
Greatjob overall.

Cons:
You could even make your models more detailed and complex.
Just add more things to the setting in general, such as fans int he background.

buddy14 responds:

thanks for the great reveiw! i'll try to fix cons thanks again.

[Jus' another day]

Wroted isn't a word :P

Written is. The movie was only ok to me, but it seems that would be more of a preference issue more than anything else. My favourite part... the ending.

[Apples & Bananas]

Hmm...

Just work on sound quality and graphics. I found it to be a funny flash. Good job.

[Leaving on a Jetplane]

John Denver

I'm a fan. Good job with the video. Of course you know I'm going to say please upgrade your graphics. However, you are one of the few people who made the mouth move in perfect sync with the song. Your video also depicted the song beautifully and accurately. Good job. The sync carried heavy weight for my vote on this flash.

[Lunchbox workout plan]

Give them cookies

Some extra animations for each song would make this flasheven better. Your humor pulled through.

[Stick war Blues]

Stickiliciousness

The motion (leg movement, flips, arms) could use some work. I liked the lightsaber effects and the little matrix thing you had going. And I know you can make better laser blasts than that. Music seemed to flow well.

[Man and Wall]

Great flash

I liked the ending. Good job with that. I think the character could use a voice and maybe some ambient sounds could be nice. That is one hell of a wall.

pillowbasher responds:

i needed some way of ending it, the other option was to have a butterfly knock it over, but thats been in so many flash cartoons.

[Sachlets: WRO 2]

One thing

You spelled possess wrong. I hate those spelling errors. Unless you intended it to be that way. Could have used more flash from the barrel.

Esach responds:

i also spelled stitched wrong i noticed, sorry about that.