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[Fight Ring (clay)]

You are one of the few

claymationists that can make an actually decent claymation. You exceeded my expectations and delivered a well done flash compared to all the clay ones I have seen. Let's see...
You made faces... something very simple, but so rarely seen.
You had blood and guts, thumbs up.
You had sound effects.
Funny announcers... check.
Greatjob overall.

Cons:
You could even make your models more detailed and complex.
Just add more things to the setting in general, such as fans int he background.

buddy14 responds:

thanks for the great reveiw! i'll try to fix cons thanks again.

[Man and Wall]

Great flash

I liked the ending. Good job with that. I think the character could use a voice and maybe some ambient sounds could be nice. That is one hell of a wall.

pillowbasher responds:

i needed some way of ending it, the other option was to have a butterfly knock it over, but thats been in so many flash cartoons.

[Sachlets: WRO 2]

One thing

You spelled possess wrong. I hate those spelling errors. Unless you intended it to be that way. Could have used more flash from the barrel.

Esach responds:

i also spelled stitched wrong i noticed, sorry about that.

[-~>AbStRaCtIoN<_+]

Aaaah....

I would like if next time you do one of these relax visual flashes you include a couple more abstract or just cool images going around. I found it to be a nice flash that taught me some vocab words. Good going!

Goat-King responds:

Thanks! I'm still improving on it, so I'll try adding things like that.

[How to play Zelda Revo]

Uhh...

You do know the revolution controller is a remote with optional attachments right? And that it's used similarly to waving a wand around like Harry Potter? Your art is fantastic and I like that face that pops up. Lengthen it, animate it, more material (maybe show Zelda jumping around waving his wand remote like a very happy child.). Just find the true specs of the Nintendo Revolution Controller at their site if you don't know already. Or maybe it was just a bad angle. :D

Eddz responds:

Thanks! I don't think I'll do much more with this.. I don't think it's worth the time as it's a joke that only some will get right now ^^;; As for the Revo controller, yeah.. Originally it didn't have the wire attatched to it, but some people I showed it to were confused, so I put it in to make it a little more obvious XD I figured that the controller might be used to fish (amongst other things), so I put it in here like this XD

[When Robots Attack]

It didn't make me laugh to much

Instead I was amazed with the art style and the repetitive motion. I love how the robots were drawn, the look, and the feel. Another job well done by all of you and well... I need to show this to my friends. Good stuff. I didn't like the song as much, but the style pulled through for you guys. :D

TmsT responds:

Some folks find it too eerie to laugh out loud the whole way through. Neil is one of those people.

["Echo Dreams"]

MAD WORLD

I haven't really seen a Flash like this... so I'm impressed. Good job. I hope to see more about the Echoes. How did you create your Flash like that? Can't wait for the next installment :D

subcultured2 responds:

It is vectorized 3d images and it takes 3 programs to render the final product. Vector rendering 3d models helps to save space and it doesn't have that fuzzy look if you put a movie import file. I then added a lot of special effects and put it all together in flash to finish it off.

[Sachlets: WRO]

Good stuff

I enjoyed it. Areas of improvement to me would be smoother animation when the soldiers walk. It almost looked as if the feet were teleporting short distances. The guns need to be drawn more accurately (ie. handle is not longer than the gun barrel) unless they were uzis of course. It would have been nice if the dead bodies stayed instead of disappearing. Music selection was fine, but could be better.

Anyway good job, 4/5.

Enoy life... with a butter knife.

Esach responds:

but butter knifes make my bleed :(

thanks for the tips

[Scredge - The Holocaust]

Well Done

I enjoyed the art style, and the song that went with it. Only thing I didn't like was the part where "Jesus" (in the song) is supposed to save them because I don't think the Jewish people think very big of Jesus, but hey no deduction for that. I was thinking of the relationship between the song and animation. I like how you drew Hitler, the topic was very sober, and again I give you praise for you art style. I like it. 5/5 I hope this flash makes it.

nuggetycenter responds:

ThNAKS YOU ME TOO!